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Review:accioHPFF says:
Hey,

I've read this before, but never reviewed it. *hides*

I really love this story, and my feed told me another chapter's in the queue. :D you see, I actually love this story?

I really like all the ways that you build up their characters. The roles that they have within the group, their reaction to the new mission, the preference in coffee- it all adds up to quite a complete image of that character.

I like a lot of your characters, especially Dom. I think her attitude as the leader is just brilliant. :P

I also loved the section are the pharmacy, and the section "carefully checking the road before she crossed it. She's so cautious, I reckon she mentally does risk assessments before she gets up." That made me laugh so much. :P

Author's Response: You had better hide. I'm pretty nifty with a light-sabre :D
But thanks for reviewing! :)... I don't understand feeds at all. I'm glad you like their characters, and I'm going to be trying to focus on a few characters each chapter, although its hard. SO MANY NEXT-GENS!
You like Dom? She's not supposed to be likeable? I mean *cough* yes, she's awesome.
Most people have been saying they like coffee, and it nearly didn't make it into the chapter, so I'm glad it did!
Yeah, Lily is cautious. So happy you like it, and thanks for the review! :D


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