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Review:charlottetrips says:
I always find stories about Helena fascinating. Then with your premise, Iím just wondering if this is going to be canon or if weíre going to go in some other direction.

As a small point, I thought Helena was dark-hairedÖ

Bringing up her fatherís death as the catalyst to strife being introduced into her relationship with her mother is believable. We all know that Helena was a rebel, but the whys and wherefores werenít really gone over. I can see Rowena becoming an uncomfortable person to be around with her intensity being focused on Helena who seemed a bit of a wild child. But itís sad to think of Rowena trying to forget her husband but also Helena forsaking her motherís wisdom and love. But there also must be more than just the loss of her father. This whole argument reeks of long-held bitterness and strife.

Youíve certainly set the tone for this story. Helena comes off as strong-willed and rebellious as well as resentful. Rowena, despite her wisdom, seems at a loss as to what to do with her daughter. I have observed that those who are intelligent and clever sometimes find it hard to understand or deal with people as opposed to their books and equations. Something that I think they tend to forget is that people arenít always logical.

Author's Response: I can't remember if Helena's hair is ever described, I just knew that Rowena is described as "fair" so I went off that. I'm never too bothered by canon haha.

People aren't always logical, and I reckon Helena's found that out for herself more than a few times.

Thanks so much for the review!


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