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Review:argetlam shadeslayer says:
AAAH, oh my goodness, the cuteness radiating from Louis is just too much. Honestly, he is the most adorable thing ever. I love him. Seriously, I adored reading the entire scene with Minnie and Louis in the compartment together - the twenty questions exchange was particularly hilarious ("Do you like any girls? Blank stare. Do you like any boys? Death glare"), but the heartfelt apology and quick hug from Louis were so sweet.

Also, is it dorky of me that I already feel so emotionally invested in this story that I want to indignantly demand justice for Minnie's forgotten birthday? Granted, it's only one day out of the year, but it was her seventeenth birthday and I just feel so badly for her. Maybe she'll get some sort of apology from her parents and all will be well with the world. Ah, I just adore Minnie so much already that I hope she gets the love she deserves. (:

Again, this was another brilliantly written chapter! I absolutely love your characterizations and descriptions of things - they're just amazing. (And so funny; seriously, half the time I'm reading Min's narrative, I'm cracking up aloud.) Fabulous job!

- Emma

Author's Response: Hahaha, he is the cutest thing, isn't he? I really wanted to bring Louis more into this new version of my story, especially since he's so crucial for the sequel, and I couldn't help but throw that scene (and hug!) in there.

Don't worry, I don't find it dorky at all! And if it is, then oh well, because I'm emotionally invested in "Something About James Potter" too, which is amazing by the way. ;) And Minnie will get the love she deserves (eventually).

Thank you so much! Your review and compliments literally made my day! Like, I can't stop smiling and feeling all warm and fuzzy inside, now. Thanks again!

-Camila :)

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