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Review:Pen2Paper says:
Oh I am such a sappy romantic! I was actually like two inches from the screen reading this!

Hey, I'm Pen2Paper from the forums with your requested review! Man you ended it just when I wanted it to just keep going! I wouldn't have wanted it to end. To answer your question. No, It's not too slow. I feel it had just the right pace.

I am so like Rose, love weddings and so I greatly enjoyed this piece especially how you made all the characters fit into it. I don't know much about her but I already friggin' adore Sophie! I can just see her bouncing about with her golden hair. Oh man! I just realised that the image i had in my head of her is young Rapunzel from Tangled! lol

Likability? Are you kidding? This is a lovable story! I love it start to finish. So many moments in between I felt a laugh escape me. (doesn't happen often)
I love how Rose thinks! Its just incredibly relatable and clearly has characteristics of both Ron and Hermione.

"Al had always been her favourite. It was unfortunate that he was now going to have to die."

LOL. I laughed imagining her expression!

Really what can I say? I love how realistic it is, the doubt, the ache she has when her past love comes back into her life, and she realises she wasn't really over him, the reflections of their young love and convincing themselves they were young and stupid and it wouldn't have worked. I love it all!

My favourite moment though was Hugo!

"Dad's going to try to cut in, Ro," Hugo said, just loud enough to hear, as he passed. "Do not, for the love of Merlin, let him."

Hahaha I laughed so hard! Love him!

Anyway you've got a brilliant chapter on your hands and its a masterful job to end with Scorpius asking what he should say instead of plainly saying it.
I love this! :) WELL DONE!
10/10

Thanks for requesting BrightStar:) Good luck with all the other chapters of this story collection :)
~Pen2Paper.

Author's Response: Awww thanks so much! Sorry for the delay, I havnt been on here!

OMG thats exactly how I pictured sophie! And I love weddings too :)

Rose is possibly my only, really, funny character. I write my other characters so we laugh at them, Rose is the one who cracks jokes - though theyre mostly mean, I imagine!

THANK YOU! :D

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