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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I REALLY loved all the detail you put into the potion brewing! I forgot to mention this in the last chapter, but I loved that you are writing about things like class times and details in potion brewing, it's a little thing that always bothers me about fics, is when authors never write their students in classes :) lol.

I really love how your characters are developing. I'm really getting a great sense of their personallites, so bravo :)

The tryouts part was really awesome! I like I said above, your descriptions and detail are very beautiful, I had a perfect picture in my mind as she flew around the pitch.

Great job, again dear!!

Author's Response: haha yes I always find that annoying too, they're at school to learn so therefore i find it important to make sure that they do :D

I really love how they are too, it's like they have their own lives! haha you'll see in the next chapter how Alyssa ran away and did something to meddle with what i had thought. I had to change all of what I had planned to happen! so yes they are certainly uncontrollable :D

Thank you for the tryout comment I was unsure of how to write it (being slightly scared of heights myself...) but Alyssa just did the job herself :)

thanks again!



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