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Review:The Last Marauder says:
I really liked this! I loved how the story floated between memories of the night before at the Order meeting and the present moment in the Auror Office. It flowed so effortlessly in that regard and it didn't seem bitty at all (which sometimes happens when people flit back and forth from memory and reality like that).

I will admit, when I heard Dumbledore say that Lupin was to bite Tonks, I thought that this story was an AU and I just missed that in the description, it really caught me off guard, I mean why would Dumbledore suggest such a thing? But then it was revealed that Dumbledore just wanted Tonks to pretend she had been bitten. That was a really cool idea.

I loved how you had Moody protest against Tonks taking the mission, how he is sort of protective of her, like an older brother. I really liked that.

All in all, this story is shaping up nicely, I can't wait to see where you go with it. I've never read a Lupin/Tonks fic with this plot-line before (so in that regard it's refreshing, as in it doesn't go down the usual route, so fair play to you for that! Nice originality!). So, anyway, please keep writing this and please update soon, I look forward to more

TLM ;)

Author's Response: Hello again :D

Yay! I get what you mean with the 'bitty' bits when you do flashbacks - it was something I was very conscious of! :)

That crafty Dumbledore ;) Haha :P Oh thank you :)

Thanks for these reviews (and the MM one!) and I'm just about finished with the next chapter so it will hopefully be up within the week :)

Cheers again, Keira :)


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