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Review:charlottetrips says:
Hey, Char here with your requested review! I just realized that I could probably just knock out the other chapter too since this is completed and I canít stand to have incomplete stories! Plus I like your writing :)

Was Tonks really in Hufflepuff or do we just like doing that to her, since no one was in Hufflepuff?

You have a way of putting in little tidbits of detail about a personís life that makes the reader feel more connected with the character. Itís a good skill to posses! For instance, now I know that Tonks is pretty loyal as a friend and also a heavy sleeper but is also close to her mother who was a good mom in that she doesnít let her daughter oversleep.

Hmmm, long-lasting chocolate.

Pernicia. What an awful name. Is her father of significance?

Gar, now that Iím reading Tonksí point of view (when Iím actually near my internet, because I saved this as a word doc so I could read it elsewhere, Iím going to check out the first chapter again because I had no idea it was Tonks), all Iím thinking about is how the Ravenclaw (because unfortunately Iíve forgotten her name) is a *insert bad word here*.

:( Oh Tonks, our lovely and clumsy Tonks, you are way cooler than anyone in that hall! I hate reading stories or watching movies where someone is getting super-embarrassed because then I become embarrassed! Itís a strange reaction known to a lot of people but for me it is a mark of good writing/acting that Iím pulled into the story like that. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm glad that you enjoy my writing! I think it's known for sure that Tonks was in Hufflepuff- I'm almost positive that J. K. Rowling confirmed it.

I'm glad that you enjoy the way I put little details about the characters into the story. Often while I'm writing I'll think "Hey! This is how they would feel about this!" and include it (a really vague example, I know...). As well, I'd love some long-lasting chocolate too... Chocolate always disappears way too quickly.

Haha- Pernicia is a unique name! Her father isn't of significance but I mentioned him because I felt like it could be a part of a regular conversation, almost like an inside joke, as if Pernicia had complained of her father's delicate constitution before and was making fun of it now.

Yes, Marcia was quite mean to Tonks. In her defense, though, she was having an awful time of it herself!

Don't worry- I get embarassed all the time as well for characters. I felt really bad for Tonks while I was writing this.

Thanks once again for reviewing!

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