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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey! Sorry for taking quiet some time reviewing the story! I was just kind of busy. But...(wait for it...) better late than never right?

Okay, so you asked me to review your summary and just to let you know, I rarely review summaries so please do not take my opinions about it too seriously if you don't like them.

Any way, at first glance the summary was kind of confusing for me (just a tad bit) so I had to re-read it and I actually understood what you were saying. The length, I thought was quiet long but then I got my head around it and realised that it was just how the words were spaced in the forums. So all in all, I think you have a very decent summary and it is captivating and mysterious (if that was what you were heading for.)

The thing that stood out to me the most were the emotions in the story. I thought you really put them to words really well and it gave a lot of depth through out the story. Yes, your descriptions were really good -fantastic, even.

I also liked the way you used the line 'We'll make time.' along the story. The great thing about it is that, its something authors can always do with a one-shots but they don't because as simple as it might seem it is kind of hard to incorporate it in a one-shot. And I think you really did well 'incorporating' it with every other elements in the story.

And as for the characterisation, I couldn't say anything else but you did such a wonderful job about it. I like the way how you made Sirius a romantic person but no too romantic. So long story short, perfect characterisation, yes?

Overall, a lovely lovely story that deserves a lot more attention because it is just awesome. I don't think I could've wished for a much better Sirius/Dorcas one-shot.

Ta,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Hi! That's quite alright! Thank you so much for your long review! I love getting long reviews. I've edited the summary - I'm really terrible at them... But thank you for commenting on it, I know it was a weird request, it was just the only way I knew how to get a comment on it!
I'm glad you thought it was a good Sirius/Dorcas one-shot. I know it's kind of clichéd and all, but it just kind of possessed me and didn't let go until it was finished. Thank you so much for reviewing!

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