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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
I like this too! Man, you've got a good writing style. I really enjoyed reading this. You're balance between description and emotions and characterisation is just awesome, and seeing how you haven't used dialogue to convey backstory or emotion, it's all executed really well.

I really love this line: "Although it was but a small thread in the fabric of his life, if it was removed, the whole of him will unravel." It really reminds me of a line from Never Let Me Go. I love your characterisation of Sirius as well - it's so different to how we usually see him (the casanova, the lover boy, the good looking one). I also love Win! She's really awesome.

The descriptions of the wedding were really, really pretty and I could picture it all. AND NOOO WIN! WHAT! Ergh I hate Death Eaters! The actions and emotions or Sirius in that moment were all beautifully well done... so, well done. :D

Overall, congratulations on writing a splendid one-shot!

Author's Response: Thank you! I like to think of this one as one my better stories so to hear/read all your lovely words...makes me squee in side :) I definitely was working on descriptions and such so I'm glad you were able to enjoy it!

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