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Review:adluvshp says:

Okay so let me guess, the girl is Pansy, and the guy is Draco, right?

I think this is a wonderful story. You've really written this quite well, it flowed together nicely despite the switching between past & present. You managed that quite well. The elaborate descriptions of how she had loved him, and how she felt while breaking up, and the little things about both of them really added color to the story. It was really heartbreaking, yet sweet to read. I liked this.

A well deserved 10/10


Author's Response: You guessed correctly. And thanks! I'm really proud of this story and how I managed to make it flow and switch up the scenes. I think it really helped that I wrote the entire past scene first and then broke it up where I thought was best and wrote around it with the future scene. If I hadn't done that, it either never would have gotten written, or really would have sucked. I'm glad you enjoyed all the elaborate descriptions, I did put a lot of thought into writing Pansy and found that task very easy, I really felt like I had a connection with her. Although the task overall was really challenging because it was so sad and made me depressed whenever I tried to continue working on it.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this one-shot! Even though it's sad, it's my favorite that I've written and so I love that it's well loved.


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