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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
So I'm finally getting around to reviewing all the stories for my business/pleasure challenge and I'm so sry about how long its taken me. onto the review!

First let me say that I loved the idea of the shipping container being a portal like the wall is for platform 9 and 3/4. I thought it was interesting and very plausable since we already know that its used to get to Hogwarts. Your characterization in this chapter was great as well and I'm really interested to see how you will get pansy involved! The chapter did a good job of setting the stage for the story and seemed to have many details well thought out such as licensing renewals and the way to get to the wizarding port. I thought this was a great first chapter and very interesting! Good Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I'm actually a bit embarassed that this is still up and potentially could be read! I do need to edit and post more of what I have written. I have some issues with the beginning.

Anyway. That said, I do appreciate the reviews! It's always nice to see unexpected reviews. :D

The shipping container seemed like the easy/obvious explanation. How do you hide a cruise ship? The same way you hide a train. Even though I have a tendency to come up with complicated ideas, it's usually better not to have to explain or use them, haha.

Again, thanks for reviewing!


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