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Review:StarryLaura says:
Well. I'm definitely excited to see where your story goes, missy. :) I'm sorry to say that it's not one of the absolute best Dramiones out there, but there's definitely an originality to it that keeps me reading. :D

I'm keeping tabs on this story! And my advice? I guess...more sophisticated language, more detailed descriptions, less dialogue in some situations? And I guess the story should be a bit less carefree, and they shouldn't be accepting Draco's adultery so easily, even if they do love each other.

I do love Ron in this story though, he's so sweet and silly, just like in the books. :) Can't wait to see more of everyone.

Author's Response: Why thank you dear! I'm glad that you're excited. Oh believe me, I know that haha and I'm glad you think it's original enough to keep reading. :)

Aww I'm so glad to hear that! Yeah reading back through it I realize it's rather dull and dry in some parts. Definitely need to work on expanding my vocabulary when writing. Point taken. :P Haha I shall work on that.

Why thank you! He's definitely one of my favorite characters to write. He's such a caring, goofy, and laid back character. I absolutely love him.

Thank you, again, for reviewing these chapters and being completely honest with me. It really is appreciated and it's reviews like yours that allow me to improve. I hope you continue to read and review, it would mean a lot.

~Mischief_managed18

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