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Review:October Sea Breeze says:
NICE CHEEKBONES! O my god. I just died laughing, this was amaaazing… Rory arrived! Rory, gorgeous Rory /not having a fangirling moment. And some other people, still no Mycroft? The Doctor has a Sonic Screwdiver! Isn't that a matter to national security?? Or did I read wrong once more - been reading this quickly and fangirly, bear with me.

Is John jealous? He's jealous, isn't it? Cause the Doctor is flirty with Sherlock? What must Rory think! Oh, by the way: thanks for not writing an Amy/Rory kiss, I might have vomited... nah, not true, just not a true shipper.

I just love the crossover, Gallifrey (I think I spelled that wrong - bad whovian here) during NEWT Astronomy and Rory reading John's blog. I can totally see him read John's blog. Poor Rory & John, both having to deal with such idiots. All those agruements by the way... I can see Rory & John become best friends... every week meeting up with one thing to discuss: how to deal with stupid friends.

Something! Something reminded me of an episode of one of the things... *goes to read again*. Well, yeah, the blog thing! God, I'm having no memory at all! No one actually reads Sherlock's blog! Well, I do, but that is not the point.

Rory got his very long story really short xD Plastic Roman... sexy plastic Roman :3 Ahem. You got rid of Amy! YOU GOT RID OF AMY! O my god, I adore you. Only a slight grundge against Amy though, do not shoot me... Rory is much more fun, he should be the Companion Forever... I DUN WANT HIM TO LEAVE! Ahem, random... been very un-random in this review actually.

He is such a hero, by the way, he sacrifices himself to go and save the world from Weeping Angels! Oh dear, sacrifices always reminds me of Michael McIntyre /random info.

Bow ties are cool. Bow ties are so cool I am not able to wear them because I'm not cool enough... the Doctor is and Rory should get a bow tie son! And where did you leave Mycroft? He's not here. not even under my sofa, I hope that when you read this you are actually writing him.. or Lestrade thinking of Mycroft or something like that, cause I need mah Myc/Mystrade... :3 (that looks like some really odd slashy pairing.. 2 Myc's? xD ).

What am I forgetting? My characterization comments! YES! I knew xD I didn't, anyway... I think it was a little off on this chapter, I find it always weird how Sherlock quickly accepts that there are Aliens. I always thought Sherlock would be rather skeptical about it... Anyway. Course, this will never happen so we actually don't know how they would all react. I keep on hoping Wholock/Superwholock will happen once... cause it is so lovely :3

That'll be it for todaaay... keep up the 30 days, the Mystrade [that still is not here! Are you actually bullying me... waiting for the last chapter to give me some Mystrade? Boo you! xD ] and the Rory/Eleven (B)romance, the Amy-not-being-there, the sheer wizarding awesomeness, the whatever I'm forgetting here!

xOSB

Author's Response: I WAS HOPING SOMEONE WOULD HAVE THAT REACTION TO THE CHEEKBONE THING. I laughed while I was writing it. Then I wondered where on Earth I come up with these things. Anyway, I digress.

Mycroft will arrive, and I know where he fits into the story as well. Yes, the Doctor's screwdriver is a threat to national security.

I see your shipper heart is particularly active - but no, there is no Johnlock here. And I don't write kiss scenes anyway - I'm terrible at fluff and this story's an excellent excuse to run away from such things and just flail at the awesome.

You spelt it right! Good Whovian! I didn't actually know about those particular things until I wrote them, but there does have to be some kind of link between the different universes and I like the way those ones work.

Fair point about Sherlock, but this is the man who said "Once you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be true." I'm drawing from that aspect of his character here, and the fact that the Doctor can scientifically prove that he's not human and the only rational explanation for having two hearts and a sonic screwdriver is that he is an alien. Sherlock's aware that there are gaps in his knowledge when it comes to astronomy in particular, so that helps as well.

Thanks for the review, it's fantastic (as always) and I hope to bring in some more awesome things in the next chapter, which shouldn't be too far away :)

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