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Review:lily_evans_ginny_weasley says:
Oh, so beautifully written, as always. I think the word I'm looking for to describe this is haunting. It's scary reading Tom's thoughts as he so casually attempts to kill people, and his joy at hurting people. I mean, we know what Voldemort's like, but it's scary being inside his head.

As for Amaya, I wish she had been braver and had stuck up for the girl, and ultimately for her own beliefs. I think that's what the pureblood mania and the Death Eaters were about, though: frightening and threatening people into agreeing with them, even indirectly. So I think you wrote that aspect of this really well.

I feel like Amaya is too good a person to end up with Voldemort and the Death Eaters, but I feel like that is ultimately what is going to happen. Thanks!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really pictured the first scene to be eerie and disturbing, so i'm really glad you used haunting to describe it. Tom's thoughts make me uncomfortable at times :P One of the reasons I'm now having difficulties with his character. I'm working on characterizing Amaya more, which is why i threw this scene in, and you're really spot on. I wanted to show a pureblood "rebel" that didn't actually rebel, if that makes any sense. And haha, you'll just have to see about Amaya!
-Naida

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