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Review:Manga_girl says:
Hey! Here I am for your requested review!

First of all, I'm going to say how I like your idea. It is really sweet and fluffy.

Harry. I found when you wrote him, he sounded slightly OOC. I think it was that he sounded a tiny bit too posh when he spoke. Apart from that, I think he was written well. Also, I liked how he thought Ginny was perfect. So sweet! He was also written well through the description.

Ginny is also written quite well. She too can seem slightly OOC but that was only a few times. Mostly, she was crafted beautifully.

Your description was lovely. I also thought this flowed really well.

One thing I picked up on was Britishism's. 'Garbage' should be replaced with rubbish and 'pants' should be trousers.

Despite that, I saw no main grammar or spelling mistakes! This is great!

Emma x

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!! I wasn't to sure about posting this one-shot, but hey we have to give things a try.

I don't want you to think me as being mean, or trying to put down your thoughts or anything, but I don't think Harry or Ginny were that OOC.

I think because a lot of people tend to make them distant it may seem like more of head cannon but I think there those kind that think of the other as there everything, and are lost without them.

I'm glad you liked it though, and I'm really not trying to sound mean or snappy, but I have written them 33 times, I feel happy with the way I write them.

I'm glad you liked my description though, that makes me happy.

Thanks so much Emma,

Lizzie

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