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Review:Manga_girl says:
Hey! Here I am with your requested review!

First of all, I'd like to say that I think you are one of the best authors on HPFF. You're writing is simply amazing and certainly some of the best I have read on this site. I'm really jealous actually. I really like Teddy/Victoire and after this I think I will read your other stories about them. I have already read 'A Fish Out Of Water' but I can't wait to look at the others.

Anyway, I'll start talking about characterisation. I think I'll start with Victoire. First of all, I just love how you wrote her. There is no way I could say she is a Mary-Sue. I'm jealous about this part of your writing too. Her personality reflects her age well. I don't know how much I can say because I think you wrote her perfectly.

I'm going to go on to Teddy now. He seems to be written really well. Again, I can't seem to spot any faults with him. Gosh, he seems like other Teddy's I have seen but different. It is hard to explain. What I mean in English is that he is written so well like I imagine him but he has his own original traits that I have not seen other authors write him like. I just love it!

Now I shall go on to description. This, again, is very near perfect. I can't put my finger on it exactly but when you write, I can barely spot faults with it! You are such an amazing writer. The description is just gorgeous. I don't really need to say any more.

I actually saw no mistakes. I know this sounds like I am exaggerating but this is definitely just perfect. I am so envious.

Overall, this is beautifully written. I feel like you captured it so well!

Emma x

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! That really makes me feel awesome - I'm so flattered that you think so highly of me!

Victoire is probably my favourite character to write. I mean, I enjoy all of my characters, but there's just something about Victoire that's just especially fun to write.

Thank you so much for such a lovely review. I really, really appreciate it, and I hope that if you do check out my other Teddy/Vics you enjoy them just as much. :)

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