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Review:sophie_hatter says:
I love this story, and this was another cracker of a chapter. The family meal was great fun. I love seeing the entire family together, so it was a treat for me. There's something about getting the Hogwart's era characters together with the next gens as adults that I find particularly entertaining.

I thought your dialogue throughout this section was great. It flowed really well, and you depicted different people butting into the conversation very nicely. I was also pleased that Ginny got some lines. I know she isn't universally loved, but she's one of my personal favourites.

I also love that you don't automatically make the entire family sympathetic. This makes your characterisation of Roxanne, Fred particularly interesting, and I love what you've done with Dominique too.

I can't help feeling really sorry for poor Scorpius, though - he really deserves a break:-)

Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: I love writing the family together. Their characters are so hilarious to write and then throwing them together is so fun :D

Fanfiction and the films have tainted my view on Ginny, so whenever I write her I try my very hardest not to write her as whiny and annoying. I'm glad you liked her in this :)

Thanks so much for the review!

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