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Review:justonemorefic says:
Ooh, I love your beginning already. . You spin empty conversation, thoughts that are sweet to the ear but bland if swallowed. Lucky for you, the people you associate with have never digested anything substantial in their lives. I think it already says so much about the Lorcan and Lysander. Even if Lorcan isn't perfect, the way Lysander sees him as only these perfect qualities (jealously, of course), I think speaks volumes. He's just as angry at himself for never speaking up, and even if he channels it through his anger to Lysander, there's part of him that knows it's his own fault too.

Really, I love all of this. But when I asked you once, you just said that opinions were easy: you either had 'em or you didn't. And if you did have them, why wait? There's such a strong voice in that. Something slightly condescending, even if it doesn't mean to be.

Baww ;_; the book. Ugh, go away Rose's fiancee.

The last lines, wow. I love them. It's just full of so much spite. Perfect conclusion to all of his thoughts here at the party.

♥ lovely oneshot! :3

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review, even though it's taken me awhile to reply. ;) I tend to try and start out stories on a good note, whether it be something wacky or descriptive or symbolic or what have you, so this one turned out to lean towards sounding nice. That was one of the lines I based Lorcan's character on, because this had very little planning, so it kind of went from there.

And yeah, there's definitely condescension in plenty of things Lorcan does, even if they come off harsher to Lysander. I mean, it's a legitimate statement, to not hesitate when you have an idea, but it does have some other implications as well.

I was feeling rather spiteful as I wrote this, it clearly came out :P Once again, thanks for dropping by!

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