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Review:EverDiggory says:
I think i would fully appreciate this if I watched the Doctor Who you know,but I still enjoyed this:D
this was a great set up chapter,and ...

can I tell you a secret?I dont hate ron in this one:O dont tell anyone,I always hate him!Kudos to you:D

I like Harry,and Ron you've characterized them well!

This was a set up chapter for more to come,so I cant go deep into much of anything.

Flow was good,and there were noe errors that really caught my eye!

I think you've got Hermione down for the most part,but I think she'd be slightly afraid...hesitant,if you will,to tell everyone about the doctor. Obviously,thats part of the story,so it was to be expected(: I hate when people jump down your thraots cause whoever wouldnt do whatever:P forget that.

One thing I absolutely must credit for you is that you are daring to write a crossover,using probably one of the hardest,most difficult characters possible--Hermione!

Good job,and thanks for the swap:D

xoxo

Ever

Author's Response: You must watch Doctor Who! It's amazing!!!
:O Haha, yay for you-not-hating-Ron!! Haha

Oh good I'm always so worried about characterisation and all that stuff because they are so defined and you can always tell when you get them wrong so I'm glad I did it right :D

THanks for the review and the swap!
Jaz


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