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Review:charlottetrips says:
OK wow. I did not mean to read something that would make me cry first thing in the morning. I thought (hoped) you would start some years after the war had ended so that there was some distance between Remus' death and the moving on part, but no, no you had to start here!

This moment was beautifully written. Tonks' conflict is clearly shown in how she moves, her words and even in her hair. She's strong and a fighter, yet a wife and a mother and all of that is seen within the Tonks you have written.

She wrapped her arms around Tonks, rubbing her back. She needed Andromeda just as much as Teddy needed her and Andromeda was here for her. "Always remember that you've made the right choice." - This is what I like about the Andromeda you have written about.

When Harry gives Tonks the news, you can already see that he's grown up, that he's a man and not a boy. I don't know if you meant to do that, but you see from the moment he appears on their doorstep that he is not the Boy-Who-Lived but the Man-Who-Survived.

This was a beautiful beginning.

Author's Response: I'm sorry it made you cry. No, this is more like a prologue, so just after the war. Chapter two is, like, nine years later. :)

Wow. Considering I've never written Tonks before, this is a very huge compliment for me! :D

Andromeda is cool. :P It's exactly how I see her. :)

I did not see Harry that way until I read this.

Thank you so much!

Sam.


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