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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
I've never read a Tom/Minerva piece before so this is foreign to me and to be honest...I think I found myself a new ship! I LOVED this. It was angsty and normally I don't read angst (because I can't write angst). I just...you painted such a vivid picture of their relationship. I could literally see a young version of McGonagall running away from this life of hers, searching for something to feel a void. I thought you captured Tom perfectly, he was very spoiled, very angry. All the things you would expect from him at that age.

Just one thing:

'she welcome his touch'

welcome should be 'welcomed.'

Other than that, absolutely brilliant.

Author's Response: YES! *CELEBRATORY DANCE!*
I love getting people into new ships. If you want some good Tom/Minerva stories to read check out 'Violet Gryfindor' and 'lilypotterfan123' they write amazing stories and first introduced me to this shipping!!!

Haha, I love writing angst! Don't know why but I find it hard to write a happy story :)

I just had someone beta my story so hopefully all those little mistakes will be gone :D
Jaz


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