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Review:Keira7794 says:
You chose Tonks. :(

But then again - I would say the same if you had chose Remus instead! :P You portrayed Tonks really well - she was on her feet and constantly thinking, just like what I imagine the auror training would have made a habit.

You showed the caring 'mother' side of her really well and Harry's guilt. I really liked it :D

Only thing I saw (I'm rubbish with grammar) is in the last paragraph, you opened with a " when it wasn't necessary. Other then that it was a great start :D

Well done :) Keira :D

Author's Response: I chose Tonks. And it was the hardest choice ever. :(

I'd feel the same had I chosen Remus, too. :D

Thank you for pointing that out, I fixed it. And thanks for reviewing. :)

Sam.


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