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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Wow!

An amazing followup chapter to the first! I really like how you're doing this story from two points of view so we get to see both sides of Tracey and Theo's life and how they actually meet! As I said before the characters are so underloved that the stories about them actually capture more interest and I really want to see what you're going to do next with this.

The only think I noticed was you spelt 'apparate' wrong in two places but no biggie because it doesn't really interupt the story!

I want you to get the next chapter up as I'm really interested about what's going to happen on the date. I am starting to really wonder though what actually went on with them whilst they were younger as Tracey was quite frosty towards him to start with. I still think Audrey is Theo's :P

Good chapter!

Author's Response: For some reason, this is one of my favorite pairings. I'm not sure if it just because it doesn't get much attention or what but I absolutely love them so I'm glad you are enjoying this chapter! I can never remember how to spell that word! Oh well i hope to get a beta to help me out with those small mistakes. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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