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Review:justonemorefic says:
Oooh! This is the second non-BoB writing I've read of yours, I think. Your style is so diverse. I think you wrote Bellatrix quite well - mostly mad and made madder by the choices she has made. And don't worry about the first section; I think it was done very tastefully. This sentence stood out: It irks her that he is ordering her about, trying to force her to see what should remain unseen. I could immediately get such a big part of her characterization from that, and it continues in the next section when she basically slaps around Lucius, heh.

But oh my, Draco as Bella/Lucius's child *___* You know, it'd totally be able to work, and I think you made it believable. I also love this bit: And so she forgets the little face and focuses on her master for she knows that he will come and he will forgive her for failing to find him sooner. For he knows that Bellatrix Lestrange holds him first in her heart and mind. At least what's left of it. You give her potential for humanity with Draco, I think. It's there, but she doesn't want it. When she sees him, she might hurt, but she's too far gone to really care.

Lovely! ♥

Author's Response: Thank you for this! It's making me smile :) (except I don't know what "BoB" means - beyond own borders, break out of box?) I absolutely LURVE that you said my style was diverse! That's what I'm trying to stick to, diversity, because I don't want to be stuck just writing Dramiones or angst (though I do write a lot of that :P)

Thank you for saying the first section was done tastefully. It chills me out to hear that. Bellatrix is, weirdly enough, not that hard for me to write (does that mean I'm close to madness? Probs).

I always thought there was some humanity to her until Azkaban and then the second War. I like that you like the twist :)

Thank you for this!


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