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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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This was such an intriguing start! First of all, I love the choice of setting in Victorian London. It seems perfect for a darker mysterious story, given that it was the setting for the Sherlock Holmes storiesand a lot of other great mysteries. If you wanted to make it even more epic, you could add a few more descriptions, maybe of the atmosphere and buidlings and whatnot, but of course that's just me as a history nerd talking.

Tristin seems like a very interesting character so far. He's obviously very skilled and cunning, and it will be interesting to find out what his motivations are. Though this chapter was very quick, it gave us just the right amount of information to get hooked. There was enough to set the plot in motion, but there's so much we don't know yet that it creates a lot of suspence.

Great job so far!

Author's Response: I know. I love writing Victorian era, and others, so it makes me sad that we will be in modern day Next-Gen soon. I get what you mean; I'm exactly the same when it comes to history. :D

Tristan's plan will unfold slowly, but surely. But he does after one; he's not just a thief. LOL.

Thank you for reviewing this!


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