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Review:Singularity says:
Yay :D So excited that you are writing this! HP, Doctor Who, and Sherlock are three of my greatest fandom loves, so to have them all combined in one story (written by my beloved RC Trip 3) is almost more awesome than I can possibly comprehend.

I think you've done some great background on Terry and Genevieve in this chapter. I love the description of the Misuse of Magical Artifacts Department and how everything gets boring after six months (unless you're Arthur Weasley, of course). I love Terry's characterization. He just seems so real. A 30 year old man, stuck at a dead end job he doesn't especially like, with no romantic relationship and very few social ones. I feel like that's probably more of the norm than people would like to admit. I think it should be fascinating to see how this seemingly ordinary wizard interacts with the thouroughly out of the ordinary Sherlock and Doctor. Granted, it will be equally amazing to see the Doctor and Sherlock interact. Can you imagine the banter? Well, obviously, since you're writing it, but I think I just got even more excited. *cough* Anyway, moving on...

I love the way you've written John and Sherlock so far. It's so very in character that Sherlock would just show up again without much of an explanation. He's never been very tactful or conscious of the emotions of others. I also appreciate that you've written John as being a bit resentful of Sherlock's disappearing act. I think that's hugely realistic. It's a big thing to forgive. I do hope they make up though since one of my favorite things about Sherlock is the John/Sherlock bromance. I'm a sucker for a good bromance.

I can't wait for the Doctor to make his appearance. And did I see that Rory will be involved? That increases my already abundant excitement by a few notches. I am completely full of yay-ness at this story. Best of luck with your writing!

Author's Response: That first comment warms my heart. They're my three greatest fandom loves as well, and the fact you're excited that I'M writing it...-squee- That's a compliment and a half. I hope I live up to your expectations.

I don't even know where Genevieve came from. I brought her into existence intending for her to just be a name that Terry talks to once, but she kind of developed a mind of her own. I'm a fan of her, I think she's cool.

I think Terry needs to be real. When you're bringing in larger-than-life characters like Sherlock Holmes and the Doctor, one more hero with a superiority complex is going to get stifling. I'll also be bringing in Michael Corner soon, and there's a good bromance there as well. I agree with you about bromances. I love me a good bromance, and this story's going to be full of them.

It's such a relief to hear I've characterised John and Sherlock well - they're such incredibly distinctive characters and it's easy to get used to the freedom of writing OCs, which is what I write most of the time. And there does need to be a bit of tension and resentment there - Sherlock let John think he was dead for three years. That's a big thing, and in this story he hasn't been back for very long - maybe a month or six weeks.

I'm looking forward to bringing in the Doctor as well - he has to have a grand entrance, of course. And yes, Rory will be involved. I'm going to have so many minor characters running around - once you factor in the TARDIS companions and Scotland Yard and the Ministry of Magic...it's going to be amazing. So very amazing. The next chapter's already written and I'm waiting to see whether I want to post it now or wait for my banner to be finished. I'm leaning towards the latter - it's always nice to have a supply of chapters ready to go.

Thanks so much for the review, it made my day! :)


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