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Review:Rosethorne says:
Hi this is Rose m with your review!

I actually really enjoyed this chapter. I think I liked the fact that it was Draco and another character rather than the usual parings you get him with. It was a bit different and I think that helps!

I agree that it could use a tad more description just so we get a feel for what the characters look like and stuff.

I love the name of this by the way!

I liked how you started this and I think that this line He could taste the freedom. Was a great place to leave it before moving on to the next part.

I think for most of the story Draco seems in character but I also agree that his farther seemed a bit out. Like this line “It's about time the little brute left” I just couldn't imagine him saying that.

I do think the flow was pretty good to this though and there was no major spelling or grammar that I picked up on.

Overall, I thought it was interesting and would read the next chapter to find out what happens and I love to know what she did with the book lol

Author's Response: Hi!

Thank you! Yeah, I got kind of sick of the common Draco pairings so I made my own! Haha.

Okay! More description for the next chapter whenever I go back and edit it!

Lucuis not good, gotcha! Thanks for pointing that out.

I'll defiantly be coming back for another review when the next chapter gets put up!

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