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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
TAG!

I was part of a challenge similar to this and had to decide Remus survived so it was interesting to see it done the other way round.

It was interesting to see how you'd portrayed Tonks's anguish when Remus was at the battle. The bit about her losing control of her abilities was a nice touch. I can just imagine her making that decision to stay with him and in a way I was willing her to because we all knew how it was going to end. The bit about her having to choose between Remus and her son really tugged at the heartstrings but we all knew that she would be making the right decision which was nice!

I love her being calm when Harry walks in because that is so realistic. When you're weary with worry and tiredness you start to block everything out and become almost limp and zombie like which I think you showed really well. And the way she reacted when she heard the news of Remus :'(

I like how you've made Harry comfort her because that's how I always imagined it to be, him comforting her and promising to be there for her.

I really liked this!

Author's Response: It was so hard sticking to my decision, I wanted Remus to stay. But I had to do what my muse said. :P

Thank you so much! I've never written anything like this before, so this is veery encouraging.

Sam.


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