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Review:MyMyMiss says:
I think I said in one of the previous chapters that I thought it was your best next gen story - I lied. This one is deffientley your best by far.

So, I really, really enjoyed reading this chapter. It was so lovely - to be honest I have only read a handfull of Louis Fics, and not many of them I have liked. Purely becuase he seems a lot like Al and James, stuck up and prude. However your version of him is great.

You have for sure, got a way with Next Gen characters. You take them too a completely new level, with a different eye as well, which I think is great. I've said it numerous times before - not only to you but to others as well. Next Gen is a lot like founder - we know albeit nothing of their generation and so we can invision them however we want too, which I think is just golden.

Normall, as all next gen readers would say, each and every next gen character canon or original, comes off as the boy/girl who gets everything and everyone he wants, sleeps with people all the time, is snooty, a princess or prince, etc.etc yet with your characters they are always different, that is why I never hesitiate when you ask for a review because I know that what I am expecting will never be what I am actually expecting.

This chapter was just so lovely, im still getting my head around it all. Your flow, dialogue, entire concept is just lovely :D

I love it!!

10/10
&& Please feel free to re-request more chapters :D

~Karni. xx

Author's Response: Sorry for the delay, ive been away for so long.

This was such a lovely review, and so appreciated. I try and make my characters different, and though i dont think i always succeed, it means alot that you like them!


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