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Review:magnolia_magic says:
Hi! I'm here from review tag!

Wow. I am so, so glad I stumbled across this beautiful story. It's just wonderfully written, and I loved reading it.

The intro is awesome, especially the personification of death--such a great way to begin this story. Actually, my favorite sentence came in that first paragraph:

"Although it was but a small thread in the fabric of his life, if it was removed, the whole of him will unravel."

I just love that line. It's so achingly beautiful, and it made me want to read on. Great job on pulling the reader in right from the beginning!

This shows a side of Sirius we don't often see, and I really enjoyed it. I like the tenderness he shows when thinking of Win, but you've also kept him true to the character we see in the books. I also really like Win; she seems like a great match for Sirius. The story of how they met proves taht she is strong and committed to the Order's cause, and yet she seems very compassionate and calm, a balance for Sirius' strong personality. I love them as a couple, and that makes their fate even more sad.

The wedding scene was just beautiful, and the morning after scene was heartbreaking. I love how you can convey such emotion in so few words, and without dialogue. And I love the ending, where it comes full circle to the moment of Sirius' death. After everything Sirius has been through, I'm glad to see his story end peacefully :)

I am just blown away! I'm so glad I got to read this, and I've added it to my favorites. Awesome, awesome job!

-Maggie

Author's Response: Wow thank you! That line! That Line is my FAVE out of the whole thing! You don't know how long I tinkered with it :)

Thank you for loving my couple. I'm actually thinking about expanding on them (though unfortunately we all know how it ends now).

Thank you for this lovely review & favoriting!


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