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Review:Manga_girl says:
Hi!

So, the first thing I thought of - character wise - was Bellatrix and Alice (Longbottom). This is probably because I wrote about Alice getting tortured by Bella and it brought back memories. :)

This is a great piece! The description is just gorgeous, I am so jealous of this!
The little twist at the end with the exploding warehouse was great! It gives the location and makes the reader really sad for the tortured girl. It makes the Death Eater seem more insane than the tortured girl would be (see why I thought it could be Bellatrix?)

Anyway, I love this so so much!

Emma xx

Author's Response: Thanks Emma! :) though there really is no need to be jealous, your writing really is excellent.

I'm really glad you liked the descriptions, that was a large part of writing this, mostly because the story is based around the descriptions. :P So I'm glad they worked, at least to some extent.

Thanks again! :)

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