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Review:charlottetrips says:
Adorable, it really was. I had to get over the accent thing (I find it admirable that you took the time to do that but it's personally something I found annoying from the books) and then over the incredulity of Fleur and Krum and then we were golden!

avoiding to look at the mirror-Viktor the lights had produced, - this sentence didn't quite make sense to me.

And onto the good stuff - this was a nice moment to witness, the moment when Viktor fully got over Hermione and moved on. It as funny reading it as Viktor is actually pretty well spoken in his head and then he opens his mouth and sounds like a foreigner. He's also a romantic and it's so adorable to look at the character, who's a sports celebrity, a burly man, and realize that he's squishy and cuddly.

His parting line to Ron had me actually laughing out loud. It's awesome that while he isn't all tied up about Hermione anymore, he still cares for her and wants her to do well (as well as him being able to verbally slap Ron with something).

This was well-written.

Author's Response: Thanks! I know the accents are a bit irritating - but it's part of their characters, you know? Like Hagrid - it's weird to see them written without it.
Ah, right. 'mirror-Viktor' = reflection, that's all! I think that should clear it up for you... :S
I wanted to include Hermione, because he had obviously liked her and liked her quite a bit and it was important to recognise that, I think. Especially since he doesn't seem the type to like loads of girls. But yes, he's adorable. Like a teddy-bear, really :D
Haha, thanks! I wasn't sure about that line when I wrote it, but people seem to like it, so it's grown on me!

Thanks for the lovely review!
Aph xx

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