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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
Hey there! *team blue*

Ahh this was so brilliant Annon! I didn't think it was slow at all; there was enough action to make it interesting, but it wasn't too hard to keep up with. Your flow was great too, explaining everything as you went along and dabbling in conversation as Rosmerta expertly moved around her customers.

I absolutely adore how you've characterised Rosmerta! She seems so capable, and I love how much she loves The Three Broomsticks. You've written her multi-tasking and happiness so well, I can really see it all her way. The 'life-and-soul of the pub' attitude is very catching :D She's such a people's person, knowing everyone and dipping in and out of conversation, and I love how well she knows her pub.

I loved how you described everything, too; your descriptions at the beginning were particularly gorgeous! It just felt so homely, and I thought that you captured the spirit of the pub so well then!

The one thing that confused me - why does Emmeline call her Bella??

I LOVED IT SO MUCH! 10/10 Annon, it was just so gorgey, and I can't wait to see where you take it :3

Author's Response: Hi Lottie :3

Thanks for a supermegafoxyawesome review! It is quite a happy fappy chapter isn't it!? I'm glad it's not too overpowering/unrealistic.

Gawww thanks so much!

Oh, Bella is her first name! I should definitely make that clear... Bella Rosmerta :D

~Annon xx

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