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Review:Aphoride says:
Aww, that was so sweet!
I like how you've started it with a sort of Prologue-type thing at the beginning, letting us see a glimpse of Aine's family. Not many other stories do that. Although it wasn't necessary to the plot (I don't think so, at any rate... I may be wrong), it started it off nicely. The normality of the scene makes me want to read on and find out how she ends up not being able to walk. Is it from birth? Is it an accident when she's a child? An accident when she's older? I wanna know!
Oliver seems pretty close to the one we know from canon as well, even though we haven't seen much of him, which is nice. I like how you managed to put in his obsession with Quidditch (the Holyhead Harpies comment) without overdoing it. Well done!

Really, really good first chapter!
Aph xx

Author's Response: Aph,

Thank you so much for reviewing (review tag is SUCH a good idea!). This is a really lovely response and I'm so happy you've noticed the normality of the family. I wanted to establish how happy they were before the accident and then juxtapose this with the rest of the chapters in the story!

I love a good Oliver Wood story and figured I might try and write him myslef, so I'm over the moon that you like his character :D

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Rach xx

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