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Review:adluvshp says:
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This was a sweet little piece, a nice take on how James and Lily got together. The narrative flowed well, and I liked the characterizations over all.

The grammar was a bit off in some places though, as you switched between tenses unnecessarily. Apart from that, everything was good.

Over all I think this was a nicely written piece.

8/10

Good work!

Cheers!
AD

Author's Response: I always seem to have a probelm with switching tenses and hope to get a beta for this to help with that. I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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