WOW! I really wasn't expecting that. I really thought the man she had fallen for was a muggleborn or just someone that wasn't him so when I read the ending I did a doubletake and a huge, HUGE, HUGE grin appeared on my face.
I love, love, love this couple.
I love, love, love your writing.
Aand, I think once the story of Jayde is over you might want to explore writing a prequel to this one-shot, perhaps a short story, of the relationship or even what happens next, or something.
Actually, what do you have planned after Jayde/Draco is finished?
Author's Response: DEEDS. You have once again made my night! This was an absolutely wonderful, unexpected and pleasant surprise! Thank you so, SO MUCH!
Muahahaha! (That's my evil laugh) I was hoping the ending would be a pleasant surprise! And I'm thrilled that I could put a huge smile on your face!
I love, love, love your reviews!
Haha, you're the second person to suggest that I continue this story... I'm actually seriously considering it now, of course, after I've finished with Draco/Jayde. This is sort of a prequel to Draco/Jayde, anyways. :-)
As of right now I don't have anything planned after Draco/Jayde. In fact, I didn't have this one-shot planned... it just sort of 'happened'. And by 'happened' I mean I was attacked by a vicious plot bunny who wouldn't go away. I've actually had an idea of turning 'Inevitable' into a series... but I'm not really sure about that.
So, other than possibly doing a sequel to 'Inevitable' and continuing this Lucius/Narcissa story, I really don't know... the possibilities are endless. (Correction - I had a Lily/James or Ron/Hermione baby plunny the other day, I may or may not be chasing it.) And someone had asked if I'd continue a one-shot I wrote for the house cup collab, so I'm considering that as well. (Okay, well when you read all that it seems like I've got a lot planned... but I swear I don't.)
Anyways, again, thank you SO much for taking the time to read and review this, dear! And I saw that you added it as a favorite, too - *Squee*!