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Review:Rosethorne says:
Hi this is Rose m with your review :D

First off, I'm so glad you asked me to read this! I saw this when I was looking though the stories on here and thought I'll have to read it cause your summary was good! So I was glad when you asked me:)

Onto the chap :) I really enjoyed it. At first, I thought there was going to be too much description, but then you did even it out with the dialogue and it definitely helps with general flow of this.

I thought most of the characters where spot on, loved mad eye

I thought that the dialogue was done well and was easy to follow.

And there where no glaring Grammar issues that I picked up on.

I liked the scenes you did when she was thinking back to when she was in Hogwarts, with the Slythrine and that.

Overall, this kept my interest and was a really good read and a different idea. Look forward to chapter two!

Good work

Author's Response: Thank you very much - I'm glad it didn't disapoint! Yey for Mad-Eye! :P Thanks so much for the review :)

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