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Review:charlottetrips says:
This was wonderfully written. I love how it's set like a tale that she's telling me, like we're sitting at the bar, it's a quiet night and she's just given me a drink and is talking to me because I've arrived alone and looking like I needed someone to talk to. I feel you've told this in true bartender fashion.

I welcome anyone into my pub. In here, there are no rivalries or hierarchies. No-one is turned from the doorstep. While inside these four, strong walls, friend greets foe, young meet old and sisters talk to brothers without argument or slight. I loved this description. It's the Three Broomsticks, how I saw it in the books as well as how it would be should there actually be one for people to escape to.

The ending where she feels so alone is so sad because, as the reader, I didn't see her as alone but then with her thoughts of feeling that way...I could see it.

The characterization was great. The little details of engagements and old men's birthdays were delightful to read. It was bittersweet and lovely.

Author's Response: Hello!

Wow, thank you so incredibly much for one of the best reviews I've ever had! I'm surprised how I ever managed to write this catually, because I've never been a waitress or anything to do with bartending. I could just picture it all in my head.
I'm so glad you like it! Thank you.
LWG :)


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