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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
What a beautiful beginning to your story! I was pulled in right away with your first sentence describing different families. I wasn't sure exactly where this story was going to go or start but I think you have a very strong starting point with some very great description! I really felt for Arthur in this chapter and how he had to be the stong dad for all his children as they surrounded Fred's body. I love how you showed the anger and the stress going through a family who is normally seen as perfect on the outside but as you said.. no family is perfect. This was a great beginning and i really enjoyed it! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the beginning to this story as well as the description. I'm also really glad that the emotions came across properly because this is a story based on emotions.

By the way, this story is about the Weasley family's recovery (particularly Arthur) after Fred's death.


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