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Review:PinkHinkyPunk says:
The mushroom conversation was just too, too funny! I also loved the 'you shall not pass' using a broom scene.

[The following applies to both chapters]
I'm the first to admit that I'm a real grammar nerd so I can't help but point out that if you're talking about the Weasleys or the Potters as in "there were ten Weasleys in the room" it doesn't need an apostrophe. Also you've confused their/they're a few times. Most people won't notice/care but it makes me sad. Sorry!

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: THANKSSS :D
I know, I get really confused with that sometimes because when I re-read it, I overthink it. And, my English teacher's sucked so I blame them for my incapable grammar :p thanks for picking that up though, I'll definitely fix it soon :D


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