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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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After reading through the summary and the chapter summaries, I have to say that I really like the idea behind this story, showing the same scene from mulitple perspectives is very interesting.

Marianna was definetely a well developed and relatable charater. Her personality seemed like a perfect fit for ravenclaw, the way she was very concerned with school and enjoyed intellectual challenges.

I really enjoyed the amount of detail in the story. Since most stories seem to focus on the social aspects of Hogwarts rather than academics, it was a nice change to see such detailed and well thought out explanations of the subject material in their classe and the organization of the library.

So the unnamed Hufflepuff is more than likely Tonks? A strange looking clutz is probably exactly how she might be perceived by somebody who doesn't know her having a bad day.

Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad that you liked the idea- it was a fun thing to do, though difficult at times to write.

I'm also glad that you liked Marianna- I tried to make her realistic and relatable and, of course, Ravenclaw-y. As well, I'm pleased that you liked the amount of detail. I actually ran into some bumps when writing about the curriculum and library because there weren't that many details available on those topics.

And yes, the unnamed Hufflepuff is Tonks- she's featured in the next chapter.


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