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Review:Ashling586 says:
Here again with another review. Yea for me, I get to be the first review of this chapter. I really liked this chapter. I felt as if I was truly getting to know Tonks on a better level. I felt that her characterization seemed really good. I really like the idea of the freezing spell that was a pretty neat thing to add. I felt that the flow and pace of this chapter was really good.
I was confused on one thing though. Is there more than one Jack? The Jack that gave Tonks the patrol schedule, seemed to answer to the name Noble when Kingsley called. Then you mention that her cubicle was between Jack Thornes. So I wasn't sure whether there were two different men or whether they were the same guy and I was missing something else where. Other than that I liked the chapter and I am excited to see what else is to come.

Author's Response: Hello :)

Ah. Jack. Yeah - that's my error. When I wrote the first chapter I didn't realsie that I had named two characters Jack. So when it came to this chapter I just carried on with two different Jack's instead of changing it (stupidly!). I'll change it now :P

I'm nearly finished the third chapter so hopefully it will be up within the week :D

Thanks for the reviews! :)

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