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Review:kirstenalanna says:
Hello! kirstenalanna from the forum with your review!

I really don't have many points to point out/ or suggest. Only that for a one shot this is a very long piece to read in one sitting. I'd suggest splitting it up into different parts/ chapters. It would give more incentive for readers to continue reading. When faced with such a huge chunk to read at one can be a bit overwhelming.

Thanks for the good read though!

Author's Response: Hmmmnnn... Not quite sure how to respond to this one. 7,500 words doesn't seem that long to me. I have story chapters that are longer.

At any rate, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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