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Review:Ashling586 says:
Here I am with your review. I thought that the flow of the chapter was nice and the pace was good. Your use of description was nice. I had no problem keeping up with the story or where it was headed. You mentioned a special guest at the very beginning of the chapter and I never did figure out who that was. Especially considering that all the characters that were speaking were those that are normally seen at all the order meetings.
I do think that you did a good job setting up the story for the upcoming chapters. I can sort of see where this is going and I am interested in seeing what is to come.
Good job.

Author's Response: Hello :)

The special guest was Remus. I think I need to go back and clarify that a bit more as Remus is usually with the wolves and therefore doesn't attend some meetings. And those that he does, he rarely gives a report. It will also be explained it the coming chapters :D

Thank you very much :)


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