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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello! I'm super-deuper sorry for the late review! School is the main reason behind all this.

Any who, no I didn't get uniterested when you told me the story involves vampires. I think I was more of a happy person! I mean if you wrote about it you wren't going to make them sparkly and vampire vegetarian were you?

I think that you wrote the story very well and if it makes you feel any better, it is miles and miles away from Twilight. I think I like this is much better than any other vampire story because it has way more depth than the rest and you kind of give us a sort of edge as to what's happening.

I like the way you opened the story with such a grim feeling. I don't know why but I never got confused while I was reading the story. I saw some of the reviews and some of them said that there wasn't much clarity between things but I beg to differ. I mostly liked the story because of the clarity. You're one of those authors who makes things complicated but it shows out as easy as pie to read. Mhm. Yay for clarity!

Overall, I'd love to see chapter two (if you want me to) since I am interested on who this girl is. Also if I'm correct...this happened 200 years after the second wizarding war right?

Ta-ta for now,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Not to worry! I am the queen of late reviewing. (I left my thread for almost a year, and I had reviews from April of 2011 I hadn't gotten to until this last week!)

I'm glad to hear that the vampires bit didn't turn you off of the story! I'm not really sure where people fall into the catagory of vampires. Some like them still, some find them tainted and overdone, even though on HPFF there aren't many stories with them in it! And yes, I was trying to stay far, far away from the Twilight vampires, to be sure.

That definitely is what I was going for! It was supposed to show that this time period is eerie and definitely not happy. Also, I'm glad everything was clear to you! It's hard to find the balance between things being *too* murky and mysterious enough to keep people intrigued. :)

Yes, I will definitely re-request! Though there's not much mention of the girl you were introduced to in the prologue, I do introduce several main characters in the next chapter, and then we start getting into the action a bit more :)

Thanks for the very lovely review!

-VioletBlade


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