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Review:Beeezie says:
So I've been kind of stalled on how to review this one. You asked me to, so I will, but I don't think it's going to be a very good one.

This was kind of hard for me to read, for personal reasons. On the whole, I thought that you portrayed the disease well - there are only a few things that I would mention. First, I didn't really feel like she was frustrated enough, though that could just be my experience with the disease. Second, I felt like while you touched on "sometimes it's good, sometimes it isn't," you could have gone into that a little deeper - it felt like there weren't really many points where she remembered things/how to do things that she didn't the day before.

Other than that, though, I thought that you definitely captured her downward spiral, as well as how difficult it was for the people around her to watch her go through that. The guilt that Harry feels in particular was very well-done.

I'm really sorry that this is such a paltry review. I'm kind of having a hard time with it - not because it's not a good piece, but more because it is, you know?

It really is an excellent job, all around, and I'm glad that you took on such a difficult subject. It's one that deserves the attention.

Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing- I'm sorry that this was hard for you to read.

Thank you for the comments- I haven't had too much experience with the disease and even though I did a lot of research on it, experience can tell you so much more. I'll take your comments into consideration for when I edit this story.

I'm pleased that you think I captured their emotions well- I definitely tried really hard to do just that.

Thank you, once again, for reviewing this piece.

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