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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
Hi :)
I LOVE LOUIS SO MUCH. One of my favorite lines:
"“I’m sure you can get girls regardless of the perverted lines. Just show them your abs or something.”
“… Would that really work?”"
He's so funny and adorable and just great!! I feel like he's actually really smart -like he definitely caught on when she asked him to kiss Piper- but he's even better for being all carefree and funny instead of bugging her about it.
I also loved the bit about insane asylums :D absolutely hillarious!!
It was refreshing to read a story where the characters don't like to drink and I really liked it :) I don't myself (I mean it's bad for you, I'm too young, and, honestly, it tastes bad.), so I can identify with Fruity's frustrations. I think it also really shows how innocent and sincere she is. She only wants to be herself; she wants to have fun when she's all there, not influenced by alcohol. It also helps us dislike Al's attraction to Piper more since she's a bad influence.
I didn't like the way Al acted, but I think I'm glad for the conflict because now maybe they will actually talk and work it out. I can't wait for them to get together -they're so cute :)
And I also kind of felt that Piper liked Achilles?? (from the previous chapter). I mean she was pretty upset that he was so obsessed with Rose...but maybe I'm wrong.

Please update soon?! I love this so much! The drama never fails to captivate me and the humor always makes me smile :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Louis! He's personally a character I've really grown to like! And I kinda did press my own dislike of alcohol on Fruity... Haha, I really don't care for the stuff. Their fight really isn't /that/ big of a deal, but it most certainly will drive the plot. Hm, well Piper, I will say is a woman torn as will develop in the future chapters, but we shall see :) There's a new chapter in the queue now!

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