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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
I was confused at first as to how this would relate to Marianna's egg-filled day, but as I continued to read, I totally saw how this would play out.

Tonks is a good friend for staying with Marcia, isn't she? I would totally be spewing my guts out right next to her if I had to take care of a vomiting friend. Yuck. I love the little bits we got to see of Tonks' characterization between her embarrassment of spilling eggs all over the library book. I especially enjoyed how she took after Ted with his penchant for sleeping through alarms, and I love that a Hufflepuff enchanted their room to be bright in the morning - it's very fitting for their house. :)

I felt so bad for Tonks. I mean, I knew it was coming since I read the first chapter, but I didn't realize it was Tonks that Marianna yelled at. Poor girl, and the fact that her hair turned pink too? Can it get any more embarrassing? I'm going to take a wild guess and say that Marcus is the Slytherin that laughed at Tonks' misfortune? Can't wait to read his thoughts on the event! Hopefully I'll get to it tonight, if not soon. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I can definitely see how the beginning of this would be confusing but I'm glad that it soon came into place.

Yeah, Tonks is definitely a good friend- I don't know how good I would be either as a help. I'm glad that you liked her characterization as well as all the other little details I included.

Oh- Marianna wasn't very nice to Tonks, was she? And yes, Marcus is the Slytherin who laughed. His part in the story is the reason why I had to label this story 15+ instead of just 12+. Hope you enjoy the last chapter!

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