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Review:Tonks1247 says:
Oh my goodness. This was a very short piece, but it really packed a punch! I can honestly say, it never crossed my mind to read [or even write] a story about Molly Weasley, so this being your first, I’m amazed. You have her characterization so intact, so instant. Her hatred, her anger, her pain all come across so easily with your choice of words. You bring the chaos she’s in the middle of to life in the first paragraph and then throw in the raw emotion she fights with a couple paragraphs later as she talks about Fred. And then Harry on top of that…it’s great! You really bring her character to life and bring emotions to her that are intense, and not the usual ‘Molly Weasley’ ones you’d think of.

I also adored the imagery you had in this! You talked about the cancer of evil spreading, in which the detail around that was so excellent. The imagery there flowed easily. This goes for describing Bellatrix’s hair too! I like the connection you made to Medusa. :D

I think I did mention this at one point already, but I’m going to say it one more time: I loved your word choice and the way you stylized the writing. I like how you put small sentences at either the start of paragraphs of in the middle of them. It really breaks down the writing and makes it feel like thoughts. It felt as though I was reading what was going on in Molly’s head at that point in time.

Great job! I loved this!
~Grimmerz

Author's Response: Oh!! You make me want to squee! (And I'd totally do it if my husband wasn't right next to me--he already thinks I'm weird). This is such an awesome review! It does me heart good to hear that I've got the characterization down. I also love that you like my style. It's just how I roll!

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