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Review:daliha says:
This was a powerful one-shot. I loved the imagery and how you tell Talen's story.

It reminded of Ariana Dumbledore in a way, still to the lengths people will go to hide something they consider to be a family shame, instead of accepting Talen they hide him.

I especially loved the last line, it was a really good closing line :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!

Talen was a character in which I was given the name for and then had to create a story around him which at first I found difficult to do although I did rise to the challenge.

Ariana Dumbledore did cross my mind whilst writing this and you can hopefully see that with the idea of Talen being locked away.

The last line was designed to be thought provoking and quite powerful so I'm glad that you thought it was

Thanks again for the review!

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